Nowadays people are facing a lot of issues regarding the security of people. Even though people are becoming precautions and are becoming aware of society, still people are not safe even at home. This essay will discuss the two main causes of the lack of safety and people's mindsets. This essay will also suggest solutions including how to be cautious in society and how to educate a child at their basic level to overcome such problems.
Even though today's world is revolving around new technologies and is updating, still there are people who do not respect others and behaving like animals. The crime rate is increasing compared to that of previous generations. Due to this people are wary of their own relations and are always suspicious about each other. How fast the culture might be but the way of looking at people is not at all changing. Crimes, Rapes, Groupism to name but a few. There are cases in which people are cheated by their own siblings. To sum up, people's mindsets and the way of accepting things also following discipline either at home or in society are still the same is exacerbating day-by-day.
Despite the fact that people around us are very dangerous, one must be very vigilant and should not easily believe a person even the family members. These problems arise when one is not educated. Through education, one can imbibe moral values which are very important in one's development. For instance, if u find anyone suspicious or vicious immediately reporting to local police stations can help to some extent. Police are also imbibing new technologies and are reacting faster than expected. Predominantly, one should always be able to self-defense if any such hazardous incidents occur. Also, the government should impose strict punishments on those who do crimes irrespective of gender.
Why the crime rate is increasing even though people are educated? Even though the government made serious laws like NIRBHAYA why people are not changing their mindsets? This essay discussed the problems on safety either at home such as domestic violence or in society. This essay discussed the solutions on how to sort out the issues and be careful even the person is trustworthy.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to that of previous generations. Due to this people are wary of their own relations ...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...oral values which are very important in ones development. For instance, if u find an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, still, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00272479564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63939464394 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539509536785 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8628819227 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4545454545 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6818181818 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192998648473 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539180582279 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465464583016 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120265449293 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413012440415 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to that of previous generations. Due to this people are wary of their own relations ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...oral values which are very important in ones development. For instance, if u find an...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, still, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00272479564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63939464394 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539509536785 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8628819227 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4545454545 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6818181818 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192998648473 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539180582279 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465464583016 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120265449293 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413012440415 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.