In our society it has been seen that people abandon playing sports while they become adult. Amusement activities almost fade away once they indulge themselves into family responsibilities and lack of schedule. the reasons needed to be scrutinized before drawing proper initiatives.
First of all, it is quite common that youth generation quit Playing sports while they become adult. On that age, they have to take several family responsibilities like working hard for livelihood and active working schedule. Day by day they lose their physical strength which results in less activeness and eventually ended up with numerous disease like diabetes and obesity. Moreover, people with tight working schedule become less enthusiastic and they never feel the importance of physical activities which were their integral part of daily routine.
There are how many initiatives can be taken by the government and local people. If the root causes are defined then it will be easier to solve this problem. For instance, separate amusement parks can be established to encourage the older people to take part in sports. physical awareness and the importance of good health campaign can exacerbate the number of people in parks and sports centres. hence, if the authority allocate and rebate working hours when they can go for swimming, football and hockey then it will motivate and change the mindset that all walks of people should participate in sports.
To sum up, In modern competitive lifestyle people are so much engaged with their job, consequently it is harder for them to participate in sports. This trend should be changed for health benefits and people should be encouraged to take part in sports even in old age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18772563177 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67921604113 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6458388627 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26148082766 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879929553338 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574892021336 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14752728956 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497498786678 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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