Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?
Money is that amenity through which human beings can fulfill their needs and satisfactions. A group of people are in favour to expend money whereas other bunch of masses believe in preservation of wealth. However, I believe storing money has more benefits as compare to expend it which I will proove with relevant reasons and examples in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are many reasons behind why some masses select to spend money in place to store. First and foremost reason is in the era of modernisation every modern man wants to live a luxurious life. He like to live like a king on this earth. Nobody wants to kills his or her desires. So, in order to achieve every material thing that provides comfort he prefer to spend instead of saving. Secondly, every person wants to enjoy every moment of present without thinking of future. This reason force a man to become a spendthrift. A research has been conducted by The Tribune which prooves that many people spend their earnings more than they earn just to want to live a conveninent life.
On the flip side, there are another group of people who are in favour of saving money. Very first reason reason behind this rescue is they are serious for their future and in order to save their future they prefer to ssve their earnings in bank. For illustration, in India mostly parents save their earnings for the best of their children. Their only aim is increasinh zeros in their bank accounts so that in future they will not face the problem of scarcity of money.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, people should save money instead to become a spendthrift. By saving money they will get more positive development as compare to negative. They should spend their earnings where it is relevant .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'kill'.
Suggestion: kill
...e a king on this earth. Nobody wants to kills his or her desires. So, in order to ach...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...material thing that provides comfort he prefer to spend instead of saving. Secondly, e...
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Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'forces'.
Suggestion: forces
...without thinking of future. This reason force a man to become a spendthrift. A resear...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...on force a man to become a spendthrift. A research has been conducted by The Tribune which...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...e. On the flip side, there are another group of people who are in favour of saving m...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: reason
...e in favour of saving money. Very first reason reason behind this rescue is they are serious ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pend their earnings where it is relevant .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7606557377 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44937638146 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518032786885 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5286356425 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283353490004 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883405164491 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612481530387 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169359042058 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047827256224 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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