Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is often seen that , a large number of people have a greater inclination towards spending rather than saving money. There are manifold contributions to this trend.And my strong belive is that ths practice openup a huge reward and therefe it is favourable.

It is clear that, the major reason for spending cash is for the fullfilament of an individual needs, dreams and ambitions. In other words, it provide a sense of happiness, satisfaction and also fills their life with cherrishable memories.

Firstly, people often emphasize on expending for providing better facilities to the family members rather than saving it. In other words, they believe that by allocating money for the higher education, better housing and medical facilities, their families can live a healthy life and children would get good jobs in the adulthood, which are imperative for maintaining tranquility in the home. For instance, a Survey conducted by Association of private medical colleges in India reveals that the parents of trainee doctors have not huge funds in their bank accounts because they spend the majority of their financial assets for paying the fees of their children. Moreover, people commonly want to use the cutting edge Technologies, such as smartphones and luxury automobiles, and to satisfy this desire they spend exorbitantly.

Secondly, in the era of modernisation every modern man wants to live a luxurious life. People like to live like a king on this earth rather than killing their desires. In other words, in order to achieve every material thing that provides comfort he prefer to spend instead of saving it.

In conclusion , although, there are many reason to save money but it is better to spend money for induvidual desires. So in future it can create better families and fruitful societies.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ge reward and therefe it is favourable. It is clear that, the major reason for s...
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...the fullfilament of an individual needs, dreams and ambitions. In other words, ...
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...ve like a king on this earth rather than killing their desires. In other words, ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
... In conclusion , although, there are many reason to save money but it is better to spend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25255972696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78332953455 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7877284408 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231017904933 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856960960418 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845532843239 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135114489318 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511865189069 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is often seen that , a large number of people have a greate...
^^
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
It is often seen that , a large number of people have a greater...
^^
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
It is often seen that , a large number of people have a greater inclination towar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...re manifold contributions to this trend.And my strong belive is that ths practice o...
^^^
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...trong belive is that ths practice openup a huge reward and therefe it is favourab...
^^
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge reward and therefe it is favourable. It is clear that, the major reason for s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the fullfilament of an individual needs, dreams and ambitions. In other words, ...
^^
Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... dreams and ambitions. In other words, it provide a sense of happiness, satisf...
^^
Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...ams and ambitions. In other words, it provide a sense of happiness, satisfaction an...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...words, it provide a sense of happiness, satisfaction and also fills their life ...
^^
Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vide a sense of happiness, satisfaction and also fills their life with cherrisha...
^^
Line 19, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey spend exorbitantly. Secondly, in the era of modernisation every modern...
^^
Line 19, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve like a king on this earth rather than killing their desires. In other words, ...
^^
Line 19, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... killing their desires. In other words, in order to achieve every material thing...
^^
Line 19, column 254, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...material thing that provides comfort he prefer to spend instead of saving it. ...
^^^^^^
Line 19, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e prefer to spend instead of saving it. In conclusion , although, there are man...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ad of saving it. In conclusion , although, there are many reason to sav...
^^
Line 25, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it. In conclusion , although, there are many reason to save money but ...
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Line 25, column 38, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
... In conclusion , although, there are many reason to save money but it is better to spend...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25255972696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78332953455 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7877284408 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231017904933 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856960960418 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845532843239 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135114489318 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511865189069 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.