It is undeniable that a surging number of individuals are more likely to watch foreign movies than homemade films. Their choices are no doubt influenced by a variety of factors and the authority should not take financial support measures to uphold the local film industries.
The reasons why numerous people adore foreign movies consist in the following aspects. Initially, the Chinese always have a sense of curiosity, which leads them to wonder how other people they are unfamiliar with actually live, especially during the Covid-19, when it is difficult to travel abroad and go through the local customs and practices in the flesh. In addition, the local films in China often tell stories about romance, which are cheaper and much easier to produce. The audience tend to feel dull and bored by only one particular topic, as time passes, less and less people are willing to choose to watch homemade movies.
There is no reason for governments to uphold the local film industries financially. For one thing, for fear that the foreign films will strike the local film productive chain, the governments have already took measures, so-call the local-produced protective period, to protect the local film industries. Taking the Avengers: Infinite War as example, this film are not allowed to cast during the summer vacation or the Spring festival, in order to assure the gross box-office revenue of the local films. For another, since the authority will pay for each film, the more films they produced, the more money they will earn. The regulation will consequently leads to a phenomenon where the directors and the producers will be prone to make movies with inferior quality.
Taking into account all these above, we can eventually reach the final conclusion that the authority should build up a more harmony atmosphere of marketing competition between local films and foreign movies instead of giving any financial support to the local film industries.
It is undeniable that a surging number of individuals are more likely to watch foreign movies than homemade films. Their choices are no doubt influenced by a variety of factors and the authority should not take financial support measures to uphold the local film industries.
The reasons why numerous people adore foreign movies consist in the following aspects. Initially, the Chinese always have a sense of curiosity, which leads them to wonder how other people they are unfamiliar with actually live, especially during the Covid-19, when it is difficult to travel abroad and go through the local customs and practices in the flesh. In addition, the local films in China often tell stories about romance, which are cheaper and much easier to produce. The audience tend to feel dull and bored by only one particular topic, as time passes, less and less people are willing to choose to watch homemade movies.
There is no reason for governments to uphold the local film industries financially. For one thing, for fear that the foreign films will strike the local film productive chain, the governments have already took measures, so-call the local-produced protective period, to protect the local film industries. Taking the Avengers: Infinite War as example, this film are not allowed to cast during the summer vacation or the Spring festival, in order to assure the gross box-office revenue of the local films. For another, since the authority will pay for each film, the more films they produced, the more money they will earn. The regulation will consequently leads to a phenomenon where the directors and the producers will be prone to make movies with inferior quality.
Taking into account all these above, we can eventually reach the final conclusion that the authority should build up a more harmony atmosphere of marketing competition between local films and foreign movies instead of giving any financial support to the local film industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ticular topic, as time passes, less and less people are willing to choose to watch h...
^^^^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ive chain, the governments have already took measures, so-call the local-produced pr...
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Line 10, column 574, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ticular topic, as time passes, less and less people are willing to choose to watch h...
^^^^
Line 12, column 206, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ive chain, the governments have already took measures, so-call the local-produced pr...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, if, so, in addition, no doubt, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3294.0 1615.20841683 204% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 636.0 315.596192385 202% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17924528302 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02185627292 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58879147552 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.289308176101 0.561755894193 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1024.2 506.74238477 202% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 16.0 2.52805611222 633% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3593696482 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.25 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463773876909 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157394423442 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952981502138 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266777150981 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727435317277 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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