Many people say to increasing number of cars in cities create more pollution, other think that industries are creating more pollution. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that with increasing number of population, people want to buy more new product compare to the past. Many people argue that due to more cars in cities are creating more pollution. However, other think that more pollution is being created from industrial areas. This essay will be analyzed both these position before reaching reasonable conclusion.
The first and foremost reason why many people believe that more traffic is being created by increase number of cars in cities, because people want to buy more cars according their family members in urban areas and they are creating more traffic problem to air pollution. Recently, Oxford University carried a survey of vehicle per house in last decade and concluded that almost 2 four-wheeler and 2-3 two-wheeler are available in urban areas in America. Another important reason is many old vehicle create more pollution compare to the latest vehicle. For example, due to this reason, Government Of India launched a policy of demolished more than 20 years vehicle. This is best way to control air pollution problem.
On the other hand, some think that industrial area creating more pollution compare to others. Firstly, industrial area not only create air pollution but also damage to water. It can be clarify that nowadays many chemical refineries throw their waste to the nearest river. For example, Times of India published one of the report and showed that almost 40% rivers are damaged from industrial waste. Moreover, due to the usage of people's demand, industrial area is drastically increased in last 10 years. Because of population, people needs more product compare to past and create more industries in nearest city side.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view about creating pollution, as far as I am concerned that traffic problem create more air pollution compare to other. As more people have separate vehical and old vehical to create more air pollution in city side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is the best
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Suggestion: in the nearest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15887850467 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58481763536 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529595015576 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0881575765 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4117647059 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.505728158866 0.244688304435 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183039952815 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128915959828 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35768216659 0.151304729494 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642309785909 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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