In many countries, the number of teenage drivers who are involved in car accidents is a serious problem.
What do you think are the causes of this problem? What solution can you suggest.
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of population, many student drive their vehicle without laying their driving licence. There are several causes of this alarming trend but measure could certainly taken to tackle this problem. which will be discussed with assisting example.
This is one of the worst social evil for which many reasons are to be blamed. The first main reason is that nowadays many student are lazy due to that they more prefer to go on their vehicles compare to by cycle. For example, Times Of India carried a survey of how many students comes to school and concluded that almost 65 percent student prefer to travel their own vehical. Secondly, many wealthy family give vehicle to their children, because of their hectic schedule of life and thinking that their children also help to carry any product nearest to their home. All-in-all, many children drive vehicle without own license, because of they lazy to drive bicycle and their parent's more addicted to go outside without any vehicle.
However, this problem can be resolved by many precautionary measures. Firstly, government should spread awareness campaign regarding the rules and regulation of road. This types of campaign more and more people are informing rules in specially teenager, who have no licence. Apart from this, many police officer should watch children's school and who student carried their vehicle, police should punish them which have no licence and do not know any rules and regulation relating motor vehicle.
In recapitulation, the analysis of cause and solution of teenager's driving. this problem started from their behaviour and their family member. but, this problem can be solved by government as well as police.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Which
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...certainly taken to tackle this problem. which will be discussed with assisting exampl...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Suggestion: because they
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16725978648 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42687927959 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6546294138 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152115820653 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668505473295 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590541742727 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11721843738 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580991125064 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.