Some people think that drug testing on animals is essential before it can be used on humans , while others argue that it is inhuman and unnecessary. However , medicine testing on wild species provides information about efficacy and other risks , i believe that animal testing is not important as other method can be used for it.
To begin with, there are many benefits of drug testing on animals. Firstly, by testing medicines on animals , scientists can make better medicine because it improved understanding on human biology and disease process. As a consequence , mortality rate will increase and hence human life expectancy will be increase.In addition to this , animal testing is the best way to test toxicity and side-effects of drug on humans, as some animals have similar biological structures to humans. To exemplify, according to a recent study, countries that allow medicine testing on animals have higer life expectancy rates than countries that have low or very low life rates due to lack of drug lasting on animals.
On the contrary, medicine testing on animal is unethical because people do not have right to use animal for their self uses. There are many ways to check drug side effects and toxicity. If scientists have detail knowledge about human biology, then they can develop drugs without using animals. Further more , using animals for drug testing is not give accurate results because drug effect on animals is some time different from the effect on human body , so it is better to use different methods of durg testing. For instance, in Italy authorities are use digital genetic engineering to check medicine toxicity.
In my view, medicine testing on animals should be baned because it is unethical and not effective. Instead of using animal testing, scientists ought to study human biology , and they should use digital technology to check drugs toxicity.
In summary, although animal testing is better way to develop new drugs , in terms of ethics animal testing is not appropriate and different methods should be used . I reckon that , the government should ban animal testing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in summary, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63646354491 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488304093567 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7515597193 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834945598484 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441895950102 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326163227899 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682822081333 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340765911805 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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