Many people these days change career throughout their working life. What are the main reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development for them personally and for the society as a whole?
Switching jobs has become more frequent in modern days than in the past because people become dissatisfied and bored with the current job within a few years. Even though there are both benefits and drawbacks to this phenomenon, this essay states that it has more of a positive impact on the individual and the society.
Currently people have various job opportunities and they often look for new careers as most of them are unhappy with the present position after staying in the same job for several years. Therefore, people get bored of their routine and believe they can perform better if they switch jobs. To illustrate, a recent research carried out by the Labor Department of United States sated that 80% of working citizens are not satisfied with their job and an average person changes his/her career every five years. The change in the career pathway will always benefit the individual and the society too. The change in jobs exposes people to various experiences, new technologies and different working cultures and thus they gain a wide range of knowledge and experience.
As a result, they become more motivated and energized to accept new responsibilities at work and finally it is an advantage for their personal development. Furthermore, this trend will merit the society in the long run because when a society consists of an energetic and satisfied work-force which has a better work-life balance, eventually the country will develop not only economically but also socially. For example, in a survey carried out among the employed population who had a recent change in occupation, 60% of them stated that they were happy with the new placement.
To recapitulate, the trend of changing career / changing jobs is more popular in the present because many people are not content and get bored with the current job after performing the same responsibilities for some years and this phenomenon will positively benefit both the person and the society too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...or several years. Therefore, people get bored of their routine and believe they can perf...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07558139535 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7201690151 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.170018952 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.307692308 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287950696343 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100282057958 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632703696517 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156815030095 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778714103449 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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