We live in an age when renting house is more common activity in comparison with past. Some people believe that rented house is better option while others claim the opposite view.
Generally, in developing countries like Turkey, Algeria, or Azerbaijan, large majority of citizens tend to rent a house rather than buying one because of slow economic growth. Nonetheless, over past few decades, people began to rent apartment houses instead o buying one in all countries. According to economists, number of households in rented houses has increased so much. In addition to this clear point, I have read an article that contains a bar chart that illustrates how percentage of households in rented house, in particular countries, has changed, and according to the chart, rented houses draw attention as most preferred accommodation type. However, in my honest opinion, rented households have both positive and negative outcomes.
Starting with advantages, nowadays, majority of people work in international companies; therefore, there is a possibility that one might be transferred to another department in foreign country. For this reason, rented house is more beneficial because you would be able to move to another apartment in some cases such as unsatisfactory house conditions and neighborhood. In addition to this, it is easier to rent accommodation near workplace than possess property.
When it comes to the disadvantages, rented apartment do not allow residents feel like home and also people are not allowed to settle down permanently in rented accommodation. Moreover, in some countries, especially poor countries, prices of rents are flexible which means prices can vary according to economic growth as it is not a piece of cake for someone to purchase his/her own property. In contrast to renters, house owners should put their houses on sale if they are unsatisfied with their home conditions which requires so much effort.
To sum up, comparing rented and owned houses, I believe that renting house is far more cost-efficient and more practical; therefore, I definitely recommend people who work in a job that has flexible strategy to rent a house rather than purchasing one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, in addition, in contrast, in particular, such as, in contrast to, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34005763689 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97887933021 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585014409222 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1850431522 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.357142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511082604067 0.244688304435 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168720094619 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778151673203 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281828605077 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574278409429 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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