Globalization has impacted not only the consumer market, but also the labor market. Though students migrate to foreign countries to continue with their career, they have to left their families behind. This essay will discuss how such distance from family outweighs the benefits resulting from working abroad.
People leave their home country after completing education in search of job opportunities. Usually, not all the people can secure a good job in their home countries. Furthermore, globalization has made the process easy to secure job in foreign countries. As a result, anyone with proper qualification, can take any international employment opportunity without much hussel. Moreover, the job-seekers are able to indulge in better standard of living by picking a country with good public services. In short, a qualified individual is free to go and work in any country of the world and enjoy the benefits resulting from it.
However, in most of the cases, international employment requires that the person leaves his own family in the home country. Global employees can hardly manage time to visit their family. A migrating employee in USA, for instance, generally takes 3 years to settle before he can visit his family. This lack of socialization and family time results in frustration for most of them. Things get worse, when there is an accidental incident (death of close relative) as they blame themselves for coming this far. All these events make the people frustrated.
To conclude, the sufferings of living the family outweighs the charm of carrer opportunities and better life. As human being are social entities by birth, they can not sustain long without indulgng in such bonding.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27106227106 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81133085145 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0358529044 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6470588235 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985040517246 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323091238418 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441007848286 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558840764544 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020058925466 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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