Many people think that the government should spent money on developing and improving road systems. Others think that car drivers should pay the cost for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A Certain portion of the population believes that governments are must be obligated to pay for the transportation infrastructure for vehicles. Another half state that those who use the vehicles should pay for the expansion of new and maintenance of old roads. In my personal opinion, drivers should be financially inquired for that.
First of all, for many owners of vehicles, it seems to be not fear that part of their taxes should be used to develop and improve roads. In addition, they assert that there are approximately half of the nation use roads every day for commuting. Therefore, it would be inequitable and inadequate for authorities to force most of the population to pay for what they use daily.
On the other hand, those, who are for road taxation, think that it will solve several problems. Firstly, taxes should discourage people to use automobiles, which cause severe problems, such as global warming and air pollution, which damage human’s health Secondly, intensive traffic is the reason for the enormous number of casualties. Therefore, reduction of transport due to taxes can save dozens of people. Another benefit of forcing drivers to pay for roads is that it will save a high proportion of the national budget that could be spent on improving other fields, for instance, healthcare or education.
Finally, I strongly believe that inducing driver to pay for a road network they use will lead to awareness of many problems that cars cause. Furthermore, governments not only will have a larger budget to invest in public services but provide modern means of transportation such as high-speed trains, that is more eco-friendly.
In conclusion, although there are few negative aspects of making drivers pay for the road network they use, there are more benefits for doing it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...new and maintenance of old roads. In my personal opinion, drivers should be financially inquired...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lution, which damage human's health Secondly, intensive traffic is the reaso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12837837838 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85615069385 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5558842855 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282698055378 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105596770183 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554060904491 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15875552024 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335312925442 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.