In some countries it has been observed that many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending them to school. Do the advantages of children studying at home outweigh the disadvantages?
In some nations, there is an increase in the number of homeschooled children. People have different opinions whether this new trend is more efficient than traditional mode of acquiring knowledge for children. I strongly believe that current education system has more benefits for a young person.
First of all, it is worth considering to teach children at home. Firstly, supporters of this method state that it ensures the safe and friendly environment for students. Therefore, they can excel academically because there is unnecessary for them worry about bullying or peer pressure. Moreover, another argument for homeschooling is that that child can learn at their own pace. This adds as well as the reason for better academic results.
On the other hand, it also has several serious drawbacks. It must be remembered that the place where an individual makes first friends, is school. Thus, learning at home could have a negative effect on one’s social skills which can be the disadvantage in the future for finding a good job, due to many employers require proper social skills, and personal life, as after adolescence it is hard to develop social skills to make friends. Furthermore, by being in public schools individuals learn how to deal with problems, such as meeting deadlines or coping with stress, what cannot be learned at home, due to favorable situation in there.
Taking everything into consideration, it is impossible to argue that homeschooling has more benefits than public schools. Despite the fact that homeschool students have a higher probability to get better results, the cost of it lost of other useful skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering teaching'.
Suggestion: considering teaching
...g person. First of all, it is worth considering to teach children at home. Firstly, supporters o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21886792453 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82710272009 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664150943396 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0408026801 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179387531744 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587646187295 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757724229007 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090348244169 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450925439307 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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