Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
Nowadays, the question “whether regions influence successful person or not?”, has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that there are several factors apart from regions that affect our lives, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common view that there are numerous factors that play a vital role in our prosperity. To put into consideration, I express why I support this issue. First and foremost is that determinations, ambitions, motivations, clear visions, and hard work are excessively influential in your lives. Secondly, it can be argued that those who have a sense of high self-confidence, as well as commitment will be able to reach themselves to the summit of success. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that successful individuals burnt the midnight oil to achieve the desired position. For example, Bill Gates is one of the prosperous persons in the world of computer science who is reputed for its immense hard working.
However, there is no doubt that efficient effect of region on success provide people with positive points. It should be taken into account that some people believe that the developed cities have outstanding impacts on others’ lives in terms of education and living standard. Moreover, they emphasized that an extensive range of inventors, scientists, and artists could mark themselves by using the facilities of well-fared cities.
To recapitulate, I entirely disagree that just region effects successful person. Since every garden may have weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...essful person or not?', has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29824561404 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01185510282 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9486813709 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218760600203 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715311869761 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902209704441 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132532057766 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067577811958 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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