Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries.” According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?
Nowadays, the issue of xenophobia has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that considering various solution by the government and individuals can be highly beneficial, whereas one must take responsibility for this prominent issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that organizing against xenophobia plays a vital role in every society, especially western countries. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that some people that look deferent, speak another language, and have different customs can appear threatening to those who are used only one particular ethnical group, lifestyle, and set of behaviors. Secondly, it can be argued that xenophobia resulted in discrimination, racism, and nationalism, which leads to violence, hostility, and exploitation. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that a group of socialists, working at prestigious university conducted that the majority of western countries suffer from an extensive range of immigrants who move to their countries for a better life, while leads to lack of resources and welfare for their children.
However, there is no doubt that some strict laws should be obtained to eliminate the xenophobia. It should be taken into account that numerous educational sessions must be held to raise public awareness to encourage western citizens to embrace diversity. Moreover, people should elect a progressive leader to have a peaceful community beside others nationalities with different attitudes and language.
To recapitulate, I entirely believe that some efficient solution must be taken into consideration for the crisis of xenophobia. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ays, the issue of xenophobia has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58131487889 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1578636488 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4661840727 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.416666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200403688917 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692218114989 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509393408734 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118648427483 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256647795575 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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