Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leader Others think that people can learn leadership skills Discuss both views

In this concurrent world it is undoubtedly true that leadership quality play vital role for any person success. Some individuals contexted that people have by born leadership skills. Other school of thought believe that leadership qualities can learn by their life experience. In this essay both the view point will be analyzed before reaching logical conclusion.

There are plausible reason because of which some people have by born leadership skills. The first and foremost reason is, it is god gifed blessings. They can easily catch up all new things which may lead them leadership among with other people. For example, According to survey by indian government 60% people have by born leadership qualities. In addition, it is inherited from their parents, because their parents have same ability but they don't get a chance to reveal the skill.

Some school of thought believe that leadership quality can learn by life experience. Firstly, proper dedicationn and hardwork, people can get learn new skills,which improve their leadership quality and knowledge. For instance, the world famous Bollywood actor Shah Rukh khan, through his dedication and hard work he can achieve success and fame in his life. Secondly, through the life experience people can learn crucial things that lead them towards leadership qualities and make them successful person in the community

To recapitulate, some people believe that people have leadership skills by born.but i firmly believe that proper dedication and life experience ,which make good leader for the world

Votes
Average: 5.3 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39754098361 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61254017481 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2724583104 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.307692308 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292817470469 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111254442418 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078504287238 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197445208699 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336668579499 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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