It is true that majority of individuals love to travel another nations. This is because excursion brings abundance opportunities for people when they are exploring new things by moving from one place to another but this can have positive consequences because tourism helps to boost the various sectors of the country.
Travel overseas is enhancing at a pace rate because of various reasons. The first and foremost reason is that people got a chance to spend quality of time with their loved ones. So, they try to explore new things, meet strangers and widen their horizons by traveling new places. for instance, Goa is on the priority list on every foreigner because of its pristine natural beauty and pleasant weather. Also they can enjoy various adventurous activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping over there. Secondly, medical expenses are quite higher in one country and lessen in another. for example, people like to visit India because of dental treatments and complex surgeries which is cheaper than developed nations.
On the positive side, trek helps to boost the economy of the particular country. As tourist like to spent money on different things which is quite beneficial for those who are unemployed and get jobs in this sector. Another pros is that, international travel helps the individuals to exchange their culture, traditions and norms with another when they travel from one country to other. last but not least, traveling aids the government to improve the infrastructure of their country which not only attracts the foreigners but also helpful for the natives as well.
Despite all these factors, there are some drawbacks which can not be ignored. some tourists never care about the customs and traditions of another countries which automatically hurt the feelings of people of those regions. secondly, tourists destroy the natural beauty of the place when they throw the litter here and there.
To sum up, people travel overseas because of various reasons and the effects of this industry is largely positive. the negative outcomes can be reduced if citizens and government take some strict actions towards throwing garbage at the tourist destinations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19830028329 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57087108483 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3656930457 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.944444444 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19393912183 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544645700186 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465966120244 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112247164841 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455935510325 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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