Telecommuting is becoming more popular in the job sectors of IT, banking and teaching. That is why majority of the individuals believe that it will be beneficial for both employees and their families while others opine that it will give stress to the home. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and my opinion in the following paragraphs. However, I side with the former view.
There are various pros why I think most of the individuals should work from home instead of going anywhere. Firstly, people feel more comfortable when they are at home and can do any business activity without any disruption. It will not only boost the productivity of the employees but also enhance their concentration level at home. Secondly, Individuals need not to wake up early in the morning to take any bus because telecommuting gives the opportunity to employees to do work as per their own preference. Also, it saves the time to commute from one place to another and improve the performance of the employees as well.
Furthermore, employees have enough time if they choose work remotely. They can easily spend time with their children and parents and get to know what are the needs of their children and what expect their family members from them. Consequently, it will create joy and happiness among family members and lessen the chances of fight and divorce.
On the other side, some belief that telecommuters and their families faces stress at home because of these reasons. The first reason is that people need a quieter space where they can set up their device to do work from home. If the house is not massive in size then it will create more difficulty to the telecommuter as well as to their family members. Another reason is that family love to watch television when they all are at home and usually call that particular person if they are unable to find anything. So, they forgot about those people who are doing work from home. It will easily distract their concentration level which make them feel more depressed.
I believe that the advantages of telecommuting are much more than disadvantages. People never feel alone when they are at home. The coffee break and lunch break can be spent with their family which is not possible at workplace. The best advantage is that people can work from any corner of the world because of telecommuting. For instance, a person from India can handle their business from USA and vice versa.
In conclusion, the pros of telecommuting are much more than cons. some amount of stress should be okay to take vast amount of benefits which is associated with telecommuting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: wake
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...family members and lessen the chances of fight and divorce. On the other side,...
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Suggestion: massive
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Suggestion: Some
... telecommuting are much more than cons. some amount of stress should be okay to take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.859375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66743873267 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477678571429 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7520128913 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.08 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.92 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349218032127 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988022328461 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758413474769 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183168032812 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886807949571 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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