Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all.
Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend?
In this sedentary lifestyle, people view bringing up children as additional responsibility, which they are not ready to take up. Various reasons pertaining to the views are disclosed below supporting my views that such trends are positive.
Firstly, India is a highley populated country with the count of babies increasing daily. With more and more people deciding not to have kids would eventually reduce the population growth rate, which is a positive sign. The reason why I consider this as positive is that at the current pahce various resources might be scearse in future. People would prefer to concentrate on their carrier and spend vacation with their life partner rather than to take kids along. They would simply be additional expense. For Instance, recently I met a happy couple who did not have kids. They told that they are happy without them. It is possible that at some point other kids annoyed them to the extent that they did not want to have them.
Secondly, When people did not have kids, they can make rash decisions or go for a trip as and when they wanted to without having to worry and plan for the kids schools. Furthermore they will have abundant time for others, unlike various parents. For example, my cousin who had twins recently is spending sleepless nights taking care of them. Though he does not regret the activities he greatly misses the time they go out on short trios. He also seems to miss his sleep.
To sum up, when people decide not to have kids it would be for a good reason and their decission should be respected,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...to worry and plan for the kids schools. Furthermore they will have abundant time for others...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75735294118 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3822508148 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0778238673 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111741232859 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355914910068 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335060393914 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736944966707 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176373706178 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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