Many people today find that the cost of attaining university level education is extremely high for the students and their families What are the causes of this situation and how can governments universities and the students themselves overcome the problem

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Many people today find that the cost of attaining university-level education is extremely high for the students and their families. What are the causes of this situation, and how can governments, universities and the students themselves overcome the problem?

Nowadays it is argued that pursuing tertiary education and obtaining a university degree entail a considerable amount of budget. While there are several reasons why higher education is markedly expensive, it seems that some effective measures can be taken to address this issue.

Attending university is costly probably because of three main factors. Firstly universities operational costs are generally high because a wide range of facilities are provided usually 24/7, and these services necessitate considerable maintenance expenses. For example, lighting and air condition of the various buildings of campus such as departments, dormitories, libraries and sports fields certainly result in remarkably high electricity bills. A second reason for this obstacle might be the university staff, professors and lecturers, recompense because they often have a PhD degree and so their salary must be of a higher level. Finally, talented students can be awarded university scholarship and funding, and it is highly likely that the required budget is covered by others tuition.

Turning to possible solutions, this problem could be resolved by the collaboration of governments, colleges and attendants themselves. An obvious step is that states play a more supportive role via supplying subsidies for universities. Furthermore, the university should also explore and employ economical managerial methods for critical budget consuming affairs. Moreover, juniors must be encouraged seeking jobs which suit their conditions, even before starting their courses. Through this, they could deposit some money for future expenditures.

It is logical to conclude that although take a university course could be costly because of some inevitable causes, the cooperation of the state, the institution and individuals may mitigate the severity of the case.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 777, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... that the required budget is covered by others tuition. Turning to possible solutio...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, second, so, while, for example, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82656826568 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01978065031 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671586715867 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2652039871 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235235364629 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770266836477 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344332299172 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125781158138 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055471704896 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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