I agree that many people use distance learning programs to study material post TV internet to study at home without attending college or university.
Firstly, Study-self also brings knowledge to learners without attending school or university. Nowadays, social is more modern and we have a lot of ways to learn new things from the Internet, Youtube, Instagram, etc. We can learn it easily and quickly but with no time limit. Besides that, there have some nonprofit courses which are established by a volunteer. And that gives a diversity of courses for us to choose to learn without losing money. For instance, in some countries in Africa, there have a lot of love classes run by a volunteer with the desire to bring the source of knowledge to the children here. Or children in the high mountains of Vietnam, are poor families and they don't have the opportunity to go to school so their lives are forever lived in poverty and ignorance. Luckily, there have some teachers who volunteer to arrive here with the desire to bring the word to the people here. As result there have a lot of love for school was built.
Secondly, the school's lesson plans do not bind us besides we have more time for knowledge acquisition and new things around us such as learning a soft skill or we can go to a workshop to learn new things from famous speakers, etc. Our time will be flexible, we also schedule time for ourselves to learn something. Instead of we have to stay up all night to run the deadline, we have more time to learn everything without having to work too hard. But it should be requested we are diligent and pursue the goal to the end. For example, near my house, there has a boy who is failing for graduation exam so he didn't go to school and study-self at home. Although not learn all the knowledge at school, he is also a smart boy and received an excellent Chinese degree. And now he works for a company with a big salary without attending university.
In short, I think we can learn programs to study material post TV internet to study at home without attending college or university, and a degree is not the only thing that determines our life.
- Children learn best by observing behavior of adults and copying it To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Many people use distance learning programmes study material post TV internet to study at home But some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university Do you agree or disagree 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in short, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5725388601 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52307799624 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487046632124 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9225787341 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0555555556 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245241388792 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868440824678 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142672797412 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275234317613 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207506544212 0.056905535591 365% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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