It is undeniable that the distance learning mode is very useful especially for those who living in remote areas,however some individuals opine that regular college or university bring more advantages rather than self-study.I am completely agreed with this statement.
on the very first place,going to college or university provides opportunity of face to face interaction with teachers,which helps to improve the communication skill of students and boost confidence. In addition,if there are any doubt in student mind they can clear it with the help of teacher because teacher can explain every topic with necessary information as a result of this learner give their best in their final exam.if student would attend college or university during that time they will interact with other students and they share their ideas with each other which accelerate thinking ability of scholar as well as have chance to learn new things from others.
moreover, when they acquire an education from university they would follow certain rules and regulation of campus which would helps to learn time management ,good habits as well as discipline. furthermore,during that time they may also participates in sports activities which will helps to keep them healthy as well as rejuvenate mind and make them creative.
conversely, if scholar study at home they would not able to utilize their time with effective way because at home no one will monitoring them and there will no rules and regulation or study time table,owing to this student will become lazy and effortless.Furthermore, they would face some difficulties because they have no any teacher who clear doubt and explain every topic deeply. The gist of the matter, college and university study is convenient way for learning instead of self-study.
- Many people use distance learning programs to study at home but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40860215054 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39287023826 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.295849112 49.4020404114 373% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.8 106.682146367 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.8 20.7667163134 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.4 7.06120827912 317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130926224526 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089655999986 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471622274813 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089655999986 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471622274813 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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