Many people use social media every day to keep in touch with friends and get social news. Do you think the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages?
With the fast evolving of an advanced society, many individuals value taking advantage of social platforms for communicating with their fellows and relatives over others. From my perspective, the benefits of this phenomenon surpass its setback . This essay will discuss both aspects
Loads of customers agree that communicating through social networking sites is far more money-saving and cost-efficient than traditional methods. Instead of spending a considerable amount of money on a payphone, users are able to socialize with their fellows or family members with ease thanks to Internet accessibility. According to a current survey conducted by BBC News, a large proportion of consumers claimed that their phone bills had been reduced remarkably since their personal social account creation. As a result, geographical distance is no longer a major issue. For instance, social networking sites allow people who live far from their home to keep in touch with their family through Facebook, Instagram or Twitter.
On the contrary, social platform users have to deal with wifi dependency. If their devices lose wifi connection, they may easily miss the latest news or communication with their partners or family. On the other hand, if people spend too much time on social media, they may become addicted to it and may become physically ill as a result.
In my way of thinking, networking sites play a pivotal role in society's communication. Despite several disadvantages, social platforms provide an effective method for communities to socialize with each other
In conclusion, networking site use has been a controversial phenomenon for a long time. Despite several advantages, this method still has some remarkable drawbacks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s of this phenomenon surpass its setback . This essay will discuss both aspects ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50561797753 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04046556154 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5591223428 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224092410861 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732103066277 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586775562738 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112904413642 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472168390596 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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