Many people use social media every day to keep in touch with friends and get social news. Do you think the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, social media is becoming popular. For many people, social networks are the best way to communicate regularly through video calls or discover information about the latest trends. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why using a social platform is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of social media. One of the main positives is that it allows people to communicate with others across the globe. Users can share their feelings with groups of friends or everyone. They can live stream special events and interact with others. This can help them feel more connected and engaged.
Secondly, it enables people to access various sources of news and information. For example, a YouTube application might follow some channels, allowing them to find out local and international news. They could even catch up with the trend when they type “popular right now” into the search tool. These platforms can help them stay informed and entertained.
Turning to the other side of the argument, using social networks too much is a major problem. To be more precise, it may distract your sleep. Taking a look at Facebook before bed as an example. This often keeps you awake and interferes with your natural sleep cycle.
Another issue is that there is fake news on social media. In other words, fake information would create confusion or fear among the public. This process takes time and can be especially challenging if misunderstanding information causes social unrest.
All things considered, social media plays a vital role in life. You need to weigh up the pros of one of the most beneficial ways to communicate with others and update news, and the cons of fake news and using it too much. Personally, I believe the benefits of communication and getting news, which are the same 2 advantages of social media, will eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99401197605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6256170636 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0572850134 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5217391304 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5217391304 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17391304348 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318301406861 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823859660049 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069808027558 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150482915298 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668147182811 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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