It is a curious fact that people are behind modern trends and fashion concepts in the current world. The main aim of this essay is to discuss is it good to were trendy dresses. I personally suggest that it is a good idea to were modern dresses.
Admittedly, fashionable dresses are the symbols of current trend. Nothing make more perfect than being individualised. Each individual has their own thought. Each one has its own right to take decisions and freedom to choose what, they actually love. To substantiate, changes in the past made the life more easy and advanced. To exemplify; in olden days people were using leaves and sac materials as their clothes. Technological improvements and ideal thoughts made the people to think practical and appropriate that helped to use dressing materials.
Moreover, fashion technology have been a good take over on career improvements. Lot of people are working in this field. If we don't support the fashion trends, it affect the job of many people.
On the other hand, loss of older traditon and culture hits on the present era. Differenciation among the people lead to separation by their wealth. Some people may were fashionable clothes and others may not have the currency to buy it. It create unhappiness in the poor people and leaving a thought in their mind that they cannot afford it. Moreover, cultures in some religion dose not support female to were fashionable clothes.
However, we have to change according to the society. If not, it is just like to be in before evolution. Just like how, the evolutionary theory tells. So, fashionable clothes has the important role in uptodating the newer informations and changing trends.
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Essay evaluation report
The main aim of this essay is to discuss is it good to were trendy dresses.
The main aim of this essay is to discuss whether it is good to wear trendy dresses.
Each individual has their own thought.
Each individual has his own thoughts.
Technological improvements and ideal thoughts made the people to think practical and appropriate that helped to use dressing materials.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? 'that' is not used properly
fashion technology have been
fashion technologies have been
Sentence: Moreover, fashion technology have been a good take over on career improvements.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to good and take
Differenciation among the people lead to separation by their wealth
Differentiation among the people leads to separation by their wealth
Some people may were fashionable clothes
Some people may wear fashionable clothes
fashionable clothes has the important role
fashionable clothes have the important role
Sentence: Nothing make more perfect than being individualised.
Error: individualised Suggestion: individualized
Sentence: On the other hand, loss of older traditon and culture hits on the present era.
Error: traditon Suggestion: tradition
Sentence: So, fashionable clothes has the important role in uptodating the newer informations and changing trends.
Error: uptodating Suggestion: updating
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
Read a good grammar book.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 283 350
No. of Characters: 1360 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.102 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.806 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.7 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.864 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.923 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.409 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.26 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.495 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at, they actually love. To substantiate, changes in the past made the life more e...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...people are working in this field. If we dont support the fashion trends, it affect t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... we dont support the fashion trends, it affect the job of many people. On the other...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...may not have the currency to buy it. It create unhappiness in the poor people and leav...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236593059937 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.16403785489 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11356466877 0.0946595960268 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0378548895899 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0567823343849 0.0437548338989 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0946372239748 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0315457413249 0.0403226058552 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78362244129 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0473186119874 0.0326793684256 145% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0883280757098 0.0861772015684 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00946372239748 0.021408717616 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00946372239748 0.011925033212 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1689.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98936170213 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36524822695 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262411347518 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109929078014 0.137316102897 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78362244129 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 62.8466082392 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.8181818182 20.7743622355 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5336930962 49.517814964 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7727272727 127.492653851 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8181818182 20.7743622355 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.318181818182 0.814263465372 39% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 39.05931657 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.40243902439 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285677236385 0.332605444948 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106073576775 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0951226351336 0.0668466124924 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475846865485 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135465593818 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097423906158 0.134430193775 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646953993883 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.24542564477 0.324371583561 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0744446147418 0.0638462369009 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182572805396 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522033826335 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.4468937876 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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