Many people who are poor died because medical expense are very high where insurance are difficult to set. Discuss problem and suggest solution.

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Many people who are poor died because medical expense are very high where insurance are difficult to set. Discuss problem and suggest solution.

1254 is the number of victims who die everyday basis the lack of medical service. The social evil of soaring medicine cost and remote distance has metamorphosed into a fatal burden for the short of facilities and lofty prices. This inadequacy can be ameliorate by providing funds and charity.
An inevitable truth dictates that the mess is a real and imminent menace to everyone because it can lose the balance of the societies and establish an under privileged country. Poverty stricken area traces it roots from low-living standard. The prevail of diseases curtail development and modernizing. A recent study affirms the belief health-care deficiency is poor in a multitude of countries.
This dilemma has evolved from both high medical expense and difficult insurance. The fact is also aggravated by the want of profit of medicine managements and companies. A classic case of which is the hospital average income that emanate from insurance every weeks can save 200 dolphins.
It requires no tedious analysis to learn that the challenge should be high on the propaganda. Not only the governments are able to provide sponsorship but prosperous people can contribute for health organizations. A vast number of citizens are volunteered as nurses and doctors to aid old and ill people, especially ethnic minorities. Human morality is an outstanding cure for this obstacle.
Subsequently, weighing all the aforementioned, it is now inevitably stated that the drawback of medical community is a crucial cancer that diminish the nation expansion. The problems need to be unscrambled the soonest.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...aces it roots from low-living standard. The prevail of diseases curtail development and mod...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ems need to be unscrambled the soonest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3162055336 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01683839105 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667984189723 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1698506678 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134131935283 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355000707495 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490193167809 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616875545004 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277694521552 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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