Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or have more disadvantages?
In this competitive era, people are obliged to work extra hour’s results in lesser playtime. This brings up lifetime pros such as stable career and secure future along with some cons related to health and relationship issues.Nevertheless having a well established life eventually settles everything else. This essay will demonstrates both aspects of such situation.
Some of the advantages of prolonged working hours turns out to be in the form of successful career and well settles lifestyle. It is believed that initial years after graduation are always challenging and it requires additional efforts to standout and it results in huge command over work, strong professional PR along with tremendous experience. Moreover it has been observed through research that people who have struggled hard in their early career have a relaxed and successful future. Therefore, working lengthy hours eventually have significant outcomes.
On the contrary, out structured schedule at workplace have some consequences as well. It leads to numerous health issues since a person does not get time to spend on leisure activities. Beside this, sitting in a similar position for a long time causes severe backache problems which could lead to major medical concern. Furthermore, since people spend more than three-forth time of the day at their workplace, they are left with minimal energy to have entertainment or relaxation time with their loved ones. A recent survey proofs this after analyzing most of the employees schedule; those who don’t maintain work-life balance have compromised relationships. Thus their personal associations are highly effected.
To sum, I would say extended work hours is a new norm in our society and it contains both positive and negative aspects to it. I believe that despite of some disadvantages which can be managed, hard work do get paid off eventually and results in fruitful and outstanding future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47682119205 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98321584418 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645695364238 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9330218059 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268008806502 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771698841979 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443116692351 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137951200822 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706709869137 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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