Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-years-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals.To what extend do you think crime is determined by human nature?Is it possible to stop children from going up to be criminals?
Investigating children's behaiver has always been concerned as it can influence quality of society in future. Some researchers claim that scrutinizing 3-year-old children's traits can inform us about their future and potential of crime commitment. While many people argue that criminals are born with negative charachteristics, I contend that becoimg criminal can be attributed to the upbringing environment and preventive measures can effectively manage childrens behaviors to avoid these kinds of actions.
On one hand, Proponants of genetic predisposition assert that studying genetic in children, three-year-old in particular, can demonestrate the pronness of committing crime in future. They believe that early behaviors might indicate individuals future tendency to crime. In other words, traits like aggression, impulsivity, and lack of empathy in early childhood can anticipate the inclination to unlawful actions. Idenyifying and recognizing these misbehaviors can be helpful in terms of considering preventing actions to avoid deterimental impacts later in life.
On the other hand, I support adovates of nurture theory who argue that environmental influences can be determinant of criminal behavior in adulthood. According to them, social, economic and environmental conditions such as poverty, inadequate education, family dynamics, and exposure to violance can significantly shape behavior and increase the likelihood of future criminal propensity. It is, therefore, vital to recognize evironmental factors that potentially increase the risk of criminal engagment and concentrate on managing them.
Finally, I think protecting children from criminality is a must and it can be achived by several preventive measures. First, steps should be taken towards awarness improvement and education. Doing this means that diffrent kinds of crime like fraud, vandalisem, murder, or robbery should be evaluated for comprehending root of each one and designe educational strategies to lower crime rate in future. I firmly believe that families should included as well. Second, providing children with a stable environment and mental help services to foster resilience in them can pave the way to a more crime free days in later life.
In conclusion, role of nature or nurture has always been questioned in probablity of commiting crime in adulthood. While many poeple state that the charachteristics that we born with have remarkable influence on this issue, I agree with the opponants who consider enviromntal elements including family problems, poor education, and poverty the main underlying reason for criminal behaviors. It is possible to reduce crim rate by educating both children and families, providing psychological cares and a stable environment and creat a society that empowers children to make posetive choices.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2425.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84337349398 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21577076202 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585542168675 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1509674809 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.722222222 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267471128364 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793888577015 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462383150021 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14363304409 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034798163927 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... as it can influence quality of society in future. Some researchers claim that scrutinizi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Some researchers claim that scrutinizing 3-year-old childrens traits can inform u...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...strate the pronness of committing crime in future. They believe that early behaviors migh...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In other words, traits like aggression, impulsivity, and lack of empathy in earl...
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Line 6, column 425, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty. It is, therefore, vital to recognize evironmental factors that potentially in...
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Line 8, column 391, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...cational strategies to lower crime rate in future. I firmly believe that families should ...
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Line 10, column 174, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...state that the charachteristics that we born with have remarkable influence on this ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2425.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84337349398 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21577076202 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585542168675 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1509674809 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.722222222 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267471128364 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793888577015 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462383150021 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14363304409 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034798163927 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.