One of the most crucial aspects of human life is healthcare. Many countries have witnessed considerable increases in both the aging population and the expense of public healthcare. That might be one of the reasons why a number of people assume that individuals will ought to fee for their medicinal treatment in the future. That idea doesn't set well with me. As a result, I'd want to explore the plausible grounds for my position in this essay.
The first and most essential point is that it is discriminatory toward certain groups of person. To begin with, every country has destitute citizens. They hardly have abundance salary to salary their bills. Consider this: if they can't afford their own basic needs, how will they be able to reimbursement for medical treatments? If this term is utilized, the country may experience pandemic illnesses like Malaria in 2010. It might happen simply in light of the fact that they don't have abundance money. As a result, people choose to surrender based on faith. Furthermore, it will have an influence on the health and prosperity of the nations.
Second, owing to the fact that only the affluent can afford to wage physicians, doctors tend to prioritize wealthy patients, ignoring their basic role to support people's lives regardless of terms and conditions. This is a horrible event, on the contrary it is true and can be seen all around the world. I can provide you with a high-level overview. In Indonesia, for example, several private hospitals prefer customers with expensive health insurance. Others who do not have it are frequently abandoned by hospital personnel. Finally, it is about wealth, due to the fact hospitals need bill to run their operations, and if they are not run effectively, they may go bankrupt.
To summarize, if pharmaceutical costs are carried by human being, it will have an impact on physicians' work and, in the worst-case situation, will reduce the nation's health rate. As a result, I will underline that I am opposed to making entity liable for their own preventive expenses.
- In many societies in the world the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare A nation s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future To what extend do you agree or 84
- In many societies in the world the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare A nation s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future To what extend do you agree or 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, for example, as a result, it is true, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98837209302 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78558155067 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7009524225 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7142857143 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138758852055 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354589464147 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399980588818 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829858212944 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030473978229 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.