many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages
Nowadays, it is trusted that topic of many homework will be finished by hand but now it is replaced by machines. There are both advantages and disadvantages for this situation, whilst multi-activity done by mechanism. In this essay, I purely disagree that it give more disbenefits rather than benefits for several cases.
In the one hand, the main disaffirmative of that issue is to be lazy for doing something the easiest to most complicated. It is because we already cultivated or familiarity to by engines. For example, in this decade youth unwilling to do anything related their life and disposed to get spoiled child to their guardians. As the result, we have not successor in future because they with bad attitude or negative-side. However, it is important to do work by ourselves and exiting in order that we can do anything without other people.
On the other hand, there is agreement of the matter is convenience of carry out to little time, because we perform double position the first is ours and secondary thing is the machines. For sample, many schools and institutes apply various tools to make it all simple bussinesslike for supporting programs. Therefore, it is so economized our time and act to another hustle which more benefits to us. Furthermore, to undertake certain fast and practical it will save our season of enjoyable life.
To sum up, from right here I believe that do of our own is more better than completed by sophisticated equipments, it is easier but not ensure to bring off our future plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun homework seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much homework', 'a good deal of homework'.
Suggestion: much homework; a good deal of homework
Nowadays, it is trusted that topic of many homework will be finished by hand but now it is ...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ht here I believe that do of our own is more better than completed by sophisticated equipme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91048909044 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1064216434 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198826680943 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06159203003 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720186032284 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11742075446 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107256492505 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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