In many western countries, there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the disadvantages and advantages of couples having no children?
Having children is one of the optimal reasons why people decide to get married because they need heirs. Besides, it also enhances the tie between them and their spouses, for example, by having a child with each other, their responsibility will be significantly enlarged. However, also because of children, it also creates a myriad of disputes and drawbacks for couples. I will illustrate thoroughly both the dark and bright side in this essay, backed by specific examples from real life.
To begin with, researches show that most western countries are in the period of old citizens, the birth rate has been dropping drastically since the 80’s, there are many reasons lead to this tendency, one of them is because more and more people believe their life would be easier without taking care of a child both financially and physically. As a result, the lack of workforces is threatening the economy and also the society. To be more specific, when the current generation becomes older, they will probably end up at caring centers since there is no close relative left to take care of them. In terms of economy, we all know that European countries are one of the biggest industrial manufacturers in the world. Without new citizens from recent marriages, who would be a perfect replacement for the current workers hence the backbone of the industry is alarmingly threatened.
On the other hand, it is without a doubt that raising a child is not an easy task to fulfill, it takes us a tremendous amount of money and time to educate them and to make them become excellent members of society such as schools, extracurricular and a long list of other factors. Without a child, there is no more problem to worry about before they go to bed and no more responsibilities to think about how to think about, it will facilitate their life dramatically. In addition, the world is accommodating to many citizens and at a certain point in the future, it will be full. By that time, some people will not have shelters, food and water and other adequate factors for us to survive. By choosing to have no children, there are no more social problems for sociologists and heads of governments to solve, and hence, no stress and an immediate remedy will be given.
All in all, many people think the purpose of marriage is to have heirs and keep maintaining the people's race. However, others believe they will not have a single child because they can spend money and time and concentrate on their jobs and life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the industry is alarmingly threatened. On the other hand, it is without a doubt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79814385151 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69455573244 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5313225058 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8101382077 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9375 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176760105565 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058595357034 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692438445311 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107024802681 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490755892773 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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