The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problem of the public. To what extent? Do you agree or disagree?
Finding life outside the earth has recently become a sensation because frankly, it is a remedy for the whole of mankind when the population is dramatically increasing. Unsurprisingly, it is predicted that there will not be enough space for humans in the next century, hence, living on another planet is apparently the most reliable and suitable solution for us. However, I only agree with this to some extent because all the issues need to be treated equally and efficiently and this essay will clarify my opinion.
To begin with, as I mentioned above, the population is alarmingly enlarging and it poses an unsolvable, tricky question to the governments all across the world. The fact that many people won't have a house and perhaps basic conditions such as food or jobs or even water has been threatening the future of human beings. Therefore, I think searching for life on other planets will instantaneously fix this problem and open a new chapter for us. For instance, NASA has found a few planets which might have a chance to possess the life and ideal, relatively identical environments to earth, they have started the exploration by sending a considerable number of spaceships to those planets.
On the other hand, spending too much money on space exploration might cause some drawbacks. To be more specific, in terms of finance scientists will not be well-funded to keep working on other social problems such as global warming, getting out of poverty or finding the vaccines for coronavirus. In addition, over-focusing on one field might not be a wise and strategic decision, given the fact that we are facing too many crises now, giving an equal budget and the same effort might be the optimal key to solve multiple problems simultaneously. By solving some of the social problems, it will augur a good future for humans and therefore, more time and available resources for us to keep finding life outside the Earth.
By way of conclusion, I believe we should keep momentum on exploring the space but also the authorities need to save some vacancy in their minds and budget for other problems and fields too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, frankly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92458100559 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80242224252 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578212290503 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1034769157 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.916666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153063263632 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577108257613 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514932628705 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850422440682 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250898206272 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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