In many workplaces online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, technology drive the world. Many people believe that, internet network are worldwide, therefor, face-to-face transmitter everyday mitigation. In my opinion, wireless communication bring enormous benefit for human.

First and foremost, online network play vital role in our community. For instance, in ancient time people communicate each other with the help of papers letter and latest mobile phone tremendous spend across the universe. Secondly, online transmission diminish time and utilize wisely such as spend time with families, extra recreation activity, leisure time, and relax, and many more. Last but not least, wireless transmission reduced transportation and improve air quality as well as save money. In particular, if human communicate each other with the assist of internet then distance cut-off than numbers of vehicle on road are less than enhance automatic air quality control.

On the other hand, there are vast cons of online communication. people are tremendous time spend on online occupations, internet games and many more activities, therefor, huge illness come early age such as increase obesity, eye effect, loose muscle and many more. Secondly, sometimes people circulate misinformation across the universe to put dangerous message the nation. To illustrate, there are some time ministries oppose the government rule that time misinformation promote fastest communicate.

In conclusion, online education are plenty pros available. There are a few disadvantage should be avoid by the people.

Votes
Average: 6.3 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... are vast cons of online communication. people are tremendous time spend on online occ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'avoided'?
Suggestion: avoided
... There are a few disadvantage should be avoid by the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82666666667 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92987675129 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3151051082 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1725023809 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501902763613 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482369144723 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10187905537 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298857096294 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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