Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
Numerous cities in all over the world have been in adversity of shortage of accomodation gravely in recent years. Some reasons explaining this issue and suggested solutions will be presented in this essay.
There are two main reasons why lack of housing is a grave problem in many cities. Firstly, due to the outbreak of population since the birth rate in many countries have experienced a significant increase recently, it seems that there is not enough houses for everyone, especially for urban drwellers. As a result, more and more people are in need of purchasing a house or an apartment to settle which thereby makes housing a serious problem. Secondly, at the same time, the government and housing planners do not have suitable strategies to build enough high-rise buildings or houses to meet the demand of an ever-increasing number of people who long to own a house. Consequently, lack of accomodation becomes one of the most prevailence in cities.
To tackle this problem, suitable and imperative solutions should be taken immediately by both city residence and the government. Regarding individual scale, each person should be an abiding-law citizen, which means that they should follow the national birth control policy. Specifically, each family should have one or two children in order to guarrantee them a shelter once they are grown-up, which thereby incidentally reduces the demand of housing. On governmental scale, I believe that speeding up the progress of planning and constructing more and more high-storey buildings will help to handle the current requirements of housing in many cities.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the high demand of housing amongst urban habitants and unsuitable strategy in housing planning are the reasons for this problem. Hence, both the urban communities and the government should deal this issue together.
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- It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do the disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages? 84
- People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- Nowadays, more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 55
- More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why? Who benefits more from this, the community or these young people? 73
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, incidentally, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27852348993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93270352511 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4210265962 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210194964333 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761983820927 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604064069451 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138859098763 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583329901297 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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