In last few decades population of world had became almost double. Population is increasing tremendously and major reason is advancement in health and medicine have reduced mortality rate and reduced survival of infants. Increasing population have several demands like food, shelter and clothing. Many green evolution have given adequate food quantity to large population. The problem of clothing was solved by discovery of different fibers.
Now coming to the shelter. There are many reasons why shortage of housing occurred. Earth has limited crust surface. It cannot be reduced or increased. Most of the development occurred in cities having abundant natural resources. Developing cities need more working people and working people need house to live nearby work stations. As land is limited initially houses were build as demand of land increased and houses were demolished and apartments were constructed. As standard of living increased the cost of living also increased. Increased GDP increased cost of housing. This pinnacle of housing cost is not affordable by comman man. The industrial and technology progress giving more chances to earn for living increased crowd in cities.
Finding solution is hard for this problem then also we can try to find some. Firstly we have to increase the number of apartments having more number of Flores. secondly we have to find uncultivable and arid land surrounding the cities. Some marshy places can be filled by the garbage that produced in city. This is called as land filling. This new new land can be used for building new housing facilities. Furthermore government should apply some rules like restriction of on establishment of new business in cities while promoting it in villages nearby.
Village are behind in progress from cities so many young people have migrated as well as are attracted towards city life. Promoting progress in villages might stop increasing housing shortage and above solution will be useful to get rid of this problem up to some extent. . The main solution awareness
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
In last few decades population of world had became almost d...
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Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ast few decades population of world had became almost double. Population is increasing...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evolution seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much green evolution', 'a good deal of green evolution'.
Suggestion: Much green evolution; A good deal of green evolution
...emands like food, shelter and clothing. Many green evolution have given adequate food quantity to la...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lished and apartments were constructed. As standard of living increased the cost o...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...partments having more number of Flores. secondly we have to find uncultivable and arid l...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: new
...y. This is called as land filling. This new new land can be used for building new housi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ed for building new housing facilities. Furthermore government should apply some rules like...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... rid of this problem up to some extent. . The main solution awareness
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...id of this problem up to some extent. . The main solution awareness
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...up to some extent. . The main solution awareness
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29754601227 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69807278289 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2189269151 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4230769231 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5384615385 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196919433948 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514190955838 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563864153666 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118368210066 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485950398324 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.1575268817 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.57 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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