Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion
With the cooperation and integration between countries all over the world being strongly promoted in recent years. Working abroad is becoming an inevitable trend of modern life. In line with that context, our country’s foreign labor market is also expanding in many countries from Eastern countries to Western countries with new job opportunities for workers. Many people believe that working abroad will bring many benefits, while others believe that living away from home will bring difficulties. In this essay, I will investigate both perspectives from my point of view.
To begin with, international jobs with professional working environments such as Japan, Korea, or the Western countries. Work conditions with modern production lines are fully equipped with the most advanced technology and development facilities materials. Working here, from a challenging work background along with the development of technology, will create motivation, opportunities to cultivate experience and improve knowledge for overseas workers. Moreover, they might have occasion to receive high income, the disparity in monetary value gives expatriates a salary that surpasses their expectations. So, this challenging job field will create opportunities for them to help them promote their dynamic spirit to continue advancing in their career.
However, there are also disadvantages when working abroad. Health problems and life-risking are difficulties that employees have to face if they are working in an exotic, poor environment and lack of conditions. Not only that, the salary from the job may not meet their spending needs such as living expenses, expensive rental costs, making the quality of life of overseas workers inevitably precarious and arduous, especially at the beginning of work. Moreover, lots of workers cannot endure homesickness and loneliness when they are confronted with a burden from their job. To overcome these things is not easy, they must have an iron will and determination when they have chosen this path.
To conclude, working overseas can be an extremely strenuous option; on the other hand, this may bring prerogatives and occasions to help you succeed and achieve. In addition, whether working in their own country or abroad, any working environment always has emulation that people will push their limits and step out of the safe zone to improve individuals-self.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... safe zone to improve individuals-self.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59065934066 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96314738452 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5218398162 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.705882353 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278155001091 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922867045134 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651567274449 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176166004434 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626309437626 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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