The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today
Information regarding how an Australian beachfront location has transformed from 1950 to the present is revealed in the diagram. Overall, this area has experienced relatively extensive transformations, the most noticeable of which is the addition of a new car park, the expansion of the transport infrastructure and the erection of recreational facilities
In the upper part of the area, a cityward road which began at an a car park has been expanded southward, encircling the area and leading to the lighthouse. While a new car park has been established in the place that was formerly occupied by a roadside playground, dining tables and a pavilion situated along the road have remained intact.
In the lower part of the area, to the west, a two-story and spacious restaurant and a facility exclusively catering for surfers have been built adjacent to a 25-m pool which has been doubled in length. To the east, an additional surf club has been erected between the unchanged facilities including a pre-existing 25-m pool and the lighthouse.
- The map below shows a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and now 78
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in an European country betwwwn 1999 to 2004 78
- The graph below shows the percentage of people in the different age groups who went to the cinema once a month in Great Britain Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction between many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: an; a
...he area, a cityward road which began at an a car park has been expanded southward, e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1556452408 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.9064742007 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.0 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088157609384 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459540988387 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441566226888 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619481265642 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331343130666 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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