The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two maps delineating the reorganization in the layout of an undetermined bookshop in 2000 and at the present.
It is conspicuous that the interior architecture of the bookshop has undergone various alterations, including the unification of particular book sections and the addition of new customer services.
According to the horizontal, the new books and travel section remained their locations right after the entrance. Similarly, the service desk is still located in its former position on the right-hand corner of the area, after the main entrance.
When it comes to the remaining sections of the store, there was a reassemble in the organization of bookcases. In 2000, the fiction genre was favored in the amount of space displayed in the store with a long shelf leaned against the left wall and a shelf right next to the prior one, which formed a huge L-shape. However, the long shelf of fiction now shares the analogous room with the cookery, hobbies and arts that transferred from the middle of the room to make way for three sets of tables and chairs. The old non-fiction department has been turned into a new cafe. In the interim, the area for fiction books in the back left corner of the store is now used for non-fiction books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...aining sections of the store, there was a reassemble in the organization of bookcases. In 20...
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Line 4, column 586, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... turned into a new cafe. In the interim, the area for fiction books in the back l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92018779343 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77859715923 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2106182218 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0602730392267 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230511233933 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248362231033 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0345650815289 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275044536619 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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