The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?
I am convinced that media is one important contributing factor for a person to become famous. The media areincreasing focus in well-known people but with a normal background. In my opinion, people should not be keen on knowing more about famous people.
Many people tend to follow well-known people for two main reasons. Firstly, they might be interested in their talent. For instance, a football player like Cristiano Ronald have over 31 million followers in one social media platform like Twitter. This is because theses followers want to learn or get motivated form a player like him as his posts mostly talk about hard work and training. Another reason to follow a public figure is the interest in beauty. One beautiful actor can get an enormous amount of followers who are carious about the actor’s secrets to stay shiny and pretty.
In my opinion, I believe that people should not be obsess about celebrities. The reason for this is many celebrities are notorious for taking drugs and expressing bad behaviors. This makes them a bad example for the coming generation which are more likely to be influenced easily. For instance, a girl could be influenced by a well-known singer because of her talent. And without noticing if this singer has a bad attitude or not, this girl might catch or imitate the same behavior or the attitude of this singer.
To sum up, many people tend to follow celebrities because they want to learn from them. However, many famous people could be a bad example especially for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96899224806 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6347125524 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5862284483 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.125 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180136925366 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678190865112 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470948066272 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127587688083 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442989176453 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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