It is commonly believed that human gender is really matters in terms of proficiency and efficacy in specific jobs.
Nonetheless this essay completely disagrees with this information and I will attempt to corroborate controversial argument in aspect of interests , salary and geographical location also play major roles . Initially Works done without passion are normally looks tawdry for instance designers musicians or art makers . in most cases they do it because of their love therefore they afford huge of their time for becoming top of their job . Contrastingly rest of people go for work so as to feed their family or gain some money . And it is crystal clear that their work often be an unappreciated or invaluable.
high-skill required jobs often lead to high salaries this objects to people concentrate on learning all the perspectives and secrets of the their sphere in order to get well paid . Then it would be clear that there will be occurred a competition, all these eventually bring us professionalism where gender really doesn't matter.
On top of those, the graphical location also hold essential role as an example countries that have adamant economics and education system have access to more developed workers whereas other countries like African ones may not get access like that or some arab countries where inequality is widespread. all these reasons may lead to disrupt some of jobs in country and finally results devastation of jobs where and other genders resident may be good at .
To conclude, gender and characters of humanity don't have an vital impact on efficiency of job instead interests and salary scale lead to proficiency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, may, nonetheless, really, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24907063197 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91017596265 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635687732342 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.441179618 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.2 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16632854053 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596182349759 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379635262054 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715282477789 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054602682103 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.