The participation of women in works done in the society has increased in the past 50 years. Some people believe that some jobs are suitable only for a gender. Although there are centainly valid points to the contrary, in this writing I will state my opinion on why such segragation is not relavant in the current world.
Admittedly most men are far more physically strong than women, however, with the declining rate of jobs which need physical power, this gap can be disregarded. A negligible number of jobs including construction workers are in need of physical man power. Having said that, a vast majority of females are stronger than their male fellows.
Secondly, is the tradition which segragates men and women from living their full lives. Sometimes it is even the social norms which confines people into gender roles. Whatever the reason is, the result can be harmful and will result in people who think they are not capable of doing certain jobs. Living in a traditional family, for many years I thought I couldn’t be a succesful engineer. All these beliefs shapes the way people percieve themselves, and will result in a society in which people believe they can not do certain jobs because of their gender.
By way of conclusion, the fact that we are living in a world where people of each gender have reached a point that was percieved as a female or male job in the past should be considered. I once again reaffirm my position on the capability of both genders in following the jobs they want to fulfill.
- Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today In the interest of public health governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products Do you agree or disagree 78
- The following is a diagram of mobile phone recycling process Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities For this reason some jobs are better done by men and others by women Do you agree or disagree 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75094339623 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56341153069 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2874521754 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191008637406 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06689849849 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560068619429 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109667855206 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458481116821 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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