Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason,
some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that males and females differ in many aspects due to their natural genders. Therefore, many people firmly believe that some kind of works is suitable for men, and women are good at other types of jobs, whereas some think that there should be no discrimination between males and females in case of job opportunities. I agree with the latter thought for several reasons, which are discussed in the following paragraphs.
First of all, gender stereotypes no longer exist in modern society. For many years the majority had been insisting on the belief that women were fragile and therefore, they should not have done tough works. For example, practicing in farmlands considered to be a masculine task. However, now the situation has changed to a great deal of extent, and more women are seen in jobs which require physical abilities. For instance, it will not be surprising seeing a woman on top of a skyscraper supervising a group of male workers.
Secondly, with the appearance of feminist sects, it has been ages that the definition of masculine and feminine tasks has altered. In fact, the borders of what used to decide whether a career was proper for males or females have blurred. As an example, if a company decides to announce a job advertisement, it is not allowed to put a limit on the gender of applicants.
To conclude, although it has been believed that some jobs are particularly for men and women could not be successful in, the definition of masculine and feminine has vastly changed. Once again, I reaffirm my position that there should be no gender discrimination in offering individuals a specific job just because of expired thoughts of the previous generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty. For many years the majority had been insisting on the belief that women were ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90940766551 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82964158812 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5823696237 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219797089578 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066835163677 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634046317284 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128778165613 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648993030166 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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