Men and women employed in full-time jobs have to share evenly household chores and caring for children at home. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, number of households, where both the partners are working is increasing steadily. As a result, the debate about employing adults involved in full time occupation and sharing domestic routines has been ongoing since eons. I strongly agree that people should share household work as the couples are working full-time.
I am of the opinion that supporting each others have saved time. Time is a very precious resource, which needs to be utilized well. Therefore, as the couples that are working in metro cities can save this resource they have started sharing their household activities. My parents are a case in point. My mom and my father get up an hour early to complete everyday tasks. If this task was to be completed by a single person, would take two hours and hence losing on valuable time.
The other reason is that it improves coordination between family members and imbibe good values in their children. For instance, I have learned from my parents how to perform daily activities, as my mom and dad are working. This has made me independent. In Addition, the couples who work together in all the activities are having a better understanding between them. Thus, the family bond and the foundation for a good society can be built, if families start working together.
The other reason is that it improves coordination between family members and taking good care of their children. For instance, I have taken care of and taught how to perform daily activities from my mom and dad. This has made me independent. In Addition, the couples who work together in all the activities are having a better understanding between them. Thus, the family bond and the foundation for a good society can be built, if families start working together.
In conclusion, after analyzing the above pointers, more and more people should be encouraged for splitting their daily homely effort. I agree with this viewpoint, as it saves time and improves communication with family. If both men and women start supporting each other in all the household activities, it will help to transfer good values to the upcoming generation, and eventually the world will be a better place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...bate about employing adults involved in full time occupation and sharing domestic routine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92702702703 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68494300106 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475675675676 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2821169331 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8636363636 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161653608101 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476575990933 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038247216065 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990376799467 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192364479198 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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