It is argued that government should reserve some of the high-level jobs for women which men normally get. This essay agrees with this suggestion completely because men and women should be considered equitable. The essay will first look at why have to treat equally between men and women and then will discuss the benefit of boosting women holding a high position in some job.
First of all, it is likely that as a consequence of global developing, equality is considered more importance. In the view of some experts, there is a majority of research which show that ability of women and man are the same. So that, no reason to prevent women can get a good position. For example, in war history of my country, so many battles succeed which lead by women.
Secondly, when women hold some high-level jobs, it is not only making the equality in work but also can get some advantages from that. In some points of view, women are more sensitive than men so it is probable that they could make a reasonable decision in some case. Furthermore, if women hold the high position in work or government, they will fight for women right such as giving more opportunities for female gender or putting forward a great many ideas to protect women.
In conclusion, it is certain that some high-level jobs should be held by female gender because nowaday equality between men and women is increasingly concerned and it also helps work going smoothly and effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s argued that government should reserve some of the high-level jobs for women which men nor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80478087649 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57878816702 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549800796813 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6843282892 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275988853873 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116458033306 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100059666207 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18457252411 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850909573486 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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