The migration of people to cities is one the biggest problems facing the world's cities today.
Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation?
People’s mobility to cities have always been a controversial issue which is faced by all developed cities. Although they have their houses in villages or in other areas, the lack of prospective, opportunities or favorable situations make them renouncing to all these hoping for a better future.
Nowadays, most of young people wish to study at university and to have a career. The quality of a course study can only be guaranteed by high level teaching centers which are located, in most of the cases, in cities. Moreover, an enormous part of all jobs are available in service sector and companies’ offices are located in centers of the cities. Consequently, people are forced by economical context to move because they have an increased guarantee of a source of income.
To solve the problem of the overpopulation of cities, governments and companies should have a long term collaboration and to communicate permanently with possible employees. For example, if in a village wiil be built factories, at the beginning of their activity the amount of taxes payed should be reduced to encourage the local economy. Therefore, investors will be encouraged to set on activities and to offer more jobs. Also, if career support is offered to villagers, they will find a job easily.
In conclusion, a good cooperation of entire system could solve a serious problem such as peoples movement to city. Regions without financial expectations should become beneficial for both people and organizations and ideal situations should be spread in all zones.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264084507042 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.151408450704 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0880281690141 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0281690140845 0.0501214627716 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0211267605634 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133802816901 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0528169014085 0.0403226058552 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07819913516 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0422535211268 0.0326793684256 129% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0915492957746 0.0861772015684 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0281690140845 0.021408717616 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00704225352113 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1556.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19920318725 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406374501992 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306772908367 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203187250996 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159362549801 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07819913516 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 66.9190494022 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9166666667 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9833293632 49.517814964 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 51.5939575033 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.24561403509 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352548285839 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118153136389 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0884190878712 0.0668466124924 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573137150605 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110514648039 0.148594505496 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144977127766 0.134430193775 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090565221368 0.0742795772207 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283434828096 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0570383368204 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220313922684 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110318911418 0.058150111329 190% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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