Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
It is certainly true that women have different personality than men. Some people say that men and women are suitable in a certain kinds of job. However, others defend that gender should not consider to be a qualification for getting a job.
Firstly, no one can argue that some professions require especially male or females. Gender has been associated with a type of work in a society for a long time. The conventional idea still does not accept women to work in professional jobs because men can perform better and more productive. For example, a surgeon, if women work as a surgeon, it may be a difficult job for them because they will lose control and cannot make an urgent decision during an operation. Moreover, most women are more likely smooth, patient and nurturing which might fit better to work in a child care centre or a nurseries centre.
Secondly, it may be not always right for gender issue. This is because, in the modern world, no one really cares about gender anymore. The individual’s potential and specific skills are more important for getting a job. Individuals should have a right to pursue in any lines of work that they want. For example, many western organisations do not exclude individuals with gender issue anymore and both men and women have same rights to work in the different job if they have all qualifications and can be able to work.
From my perspective, I disagree with this statement because it is not fair to discriminate others with the gender issue. In the modern world, the sex discrimination should not be concerned in anymore, women and men are equally and work in all fields. Hopefully, if we can change this attitude, it will bring benefits to both sexes and we will live in a world without sex discrimination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230088495575 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.147492625369 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0796460176991 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0737463126844 0.0501214627716 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383480825959 0.0437548338989 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12389380531 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0176991150442 0.0403226058552 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.77512560816 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.023598820059 0.0326793684256 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103244837758 0.0861772015684 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0412979351032 0.021408717616 193% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00294985250737 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1767.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77450980392 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326797385621 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218954248366 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156862745098 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104575163399 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77512560816 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.8247275113 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.125 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6914346649 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4375 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 41.0204248366 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.43181818182 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315590930455 0.332605444948 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0821003027702 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0747214813183 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475861854442 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128107204379 0.148594505496 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116307106999 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047594493706 0.0742795772207 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342384712151 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.078365724367 0.0638462369009 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217719260233 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207167432724 0.058150111329 36% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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