Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language?
There is no doubt that many students attempt to study in English speaking countries, say, Britain, Australia or Canada and the motivation for that should be required to investigate and the reason of the importance of English as an international language as well.
First of all, English was chosen as an international language due to the information and technologies are mostly written in mostly English as well as the inventors and developers are from those English speaking states. In fact, it is a well-known fact that most computer software and applications are operated using the English. Therefore, as long as developing countries desire to improve economic system by contemporary technologies, they have no alternatives without learning English language.
Furthermore, English was accepted as a common language all over the world in order to integrate people. In particular, it contributes the possibility for representatives of most countries to collaborate with other states easily without any challenges in using language, regardless of the diverse language they have. Hence, there are fewer global concerns as the most nations have interacted cooperatively owing to the common language they utilize.
Secondly, if developing countries want to survive, they must either purchase new technologies or establish its branches, so as to enhance the economy rate. Thus, the government of underdeveloped states offers a variety of opportunities for youngsters to study in most developed states including USA, Canada or England so as to provide them with an efficient education. As a result, young well-educated generation contributes for evolving the economic system by their new innovations and experiments.
On the other hand, it appears to be injustice that to acknowledge the English as an international language. Since, it might enslave other nations in front of the English nations. Eventually, the inequality confronts people to the possibility of discrimination in racism.
Having investigated the arguments, it appears me that studying the English language is necessary for every nation as a common language we require and tackle some global issues cooperatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in fact, in particular, no doubt, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59214501511 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26647162769 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2940193098 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.214285714 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247746680459 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086089084807 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696838388056 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137962565883 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732138290631 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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