Modern buildings change the character and appearance of towns and cities. The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Calibri Light';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun;
mso-hansi-font-family:Arial;mso-bidi-font-family:Arial;font-size:11.0000pt;">Many people claim that the modern design of buildings nowadays has resulted in the lost of the cultural values of towns and cities, and it is widely believed that the government should take action to prevent this by enforcing traditional design on buildings. In my point of views, there are a few reasons to oppose such reflections.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Calibri Light';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun;
mso-hansi-font-family:Arial;mso-bidi-font-family:Arial;font-size:11.0000pt;">To begin with, architect is about creating and designing. New building styles should be implied to adapt the current era and demands of people. For example, in the countryside of Vietnam, houses are built by wood used to be very famous due to the poor living conditionals of the citizens. However, in recent years, people are in favour of brick house, which is firm and easily to paint with different colour, because of it stability and decoration. Therefore, it is considered to be not feasible to require someone to construct building in the original styles.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Calibri Light';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun;
mso-hansi-font-family:Arial;mso-bidi-font-family:Arial;font-size:11.0000pt;">Next, the cultural values of towns and cities cannot be identified by the appearance and character of such places only. As far as I concerned, the culture of one place can be illustrates through many ways including cuisine, life style, people, to name but three. For instance, tourists still can discover the remarkable culture of English with the two storeys bus, the love for tea or the royal family. All of those play a key role in the British culture besides buildings style. Consequently, traditional building is not the only way to demonstrate a country, a town or a particular city<font face="Arial">’</font><font face="Calibri Light">s cultural identity. </font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-spacerun:'yes';font-family:'Calibri Light';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun;
mso-hansi-font-family:Arial;mso-bidi-font-family:Arial;font-size:11.0000pt;">In conclusion, I deem that there are other traits to define a place culture. It is not quite necessary to demand people to construct traditional edifice to protect to trait of culture, and in the future, the idea of create building with pristine design may also not be agree</span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2431.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 7.54968944099 5.12529762239 147% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.5689249083 2.80592935109 412% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596273291925 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.60771543086 137% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.072245237 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.583333333 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123394868835 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772263160469 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614408340449 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829991846008 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349574681065 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.0946893788 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.67 50.2224549098 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 26.81 12.4159519038 216% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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