Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Someone think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative.
Discuss both these points of view and give your opinion.
A topical issue in modern society is the difference of lifestyle in the past and today. It is often said that it has many benefits; however others feel that it is disadvantageous. This essay will examine both sides of the argument and provide an overall opinion.
On the one hand, some people claim that lifestyle in the past is more advantageous for a number of reasons. First of all, the environment was very clean without industrialization. To elaborate, in the past, the rate of forests which were covered and produced oxygen in the atmosphere was static; nevertheless, this rate is decreasing at the moment. Secondly, species did not pose a growing threat. Therefore, the number of animals which were reproduced was higher.
On the other hand, there are two main reasons why people think that modern lifestyle has positive impacts. Firstly, there is a significant increase in the development of technology. For example, many kinds of robots are used for industrial and domestic purposes to save time like driers and vacuum machine. Furthermore, people who live in modern society can access the Internet to work and study. For instance, many schools hold online classrooms to teach, and using the Internet is a good method to send documents to students such as homework and assignments.
In conclusion, the change of lifestyle is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. I am of the opinion that society is growing rapidly in the future, and lifestyle is also altered more. If people live in the conventional period, they will still preserve traditional value.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02671755725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88255888707 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1051015711 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18400306767 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566196949299 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055575957229 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110612125053 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397386218855 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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