Modern lifestyles make hard for people to lead active and healthy lives. Why is this the case? What governments and large companies should do to help people do exercise?
It is widely believed that a change of lifestyle in a couple of recent decades is actually a hindrance to people today to be healthy and active. The reasons for this are varied, and steps proposed in this essay should be taken to mitigate this problem.
The fact that people today are leading a sedentary and unhealthy lifestyle stems from a host of reasons. To begin with, owning to the development of modern technologies and the wide availability of the Internet, people are now spending the bulk of their time using technological devices and being online. The implication of this is that instead of engaging in active activities like doing exercise or playing sports, people would rather sit in front of their computers or use mobile phones because doing so is, more often than not, more enjoyable.
Another reason explaining why more people are being inactive and unhealthy is the ever-growing fast food industry. As people with a hectic schedule are often hard-pressed to cook themselves, they tend to resort to eating fast food, which is arguably more time-saving. This is worsened by the fact that fast food companies are offering their food products at a more affordable price point.
Nevertheless, I believe that the problem of people getting more inactive and unhealthy due to modern lifestyles is not entirely intractable. From my perspective, the foremost solution for governments is to allocate more funding to programs that educate people on the detriment of a sedentary lifestyle and an unhealthy diet. In addition to making people aware of how harmful the above-mentioned factors are, campaigns that encourage people to be more physically active are also warranted. For instance, the authorities could institute days in which the masses are required to go out and jog, for example, collectively. This would definitely not only keep people away from their technological mobile devices but also act as a mean to bond people together.
In conclusion, while the ongoing sedentary lifestyle that is being led by many people can be attributed to a number of reasons, I believe this would be remedied should the solution mentioned above is adopted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87078486242 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9461372044 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322893349625 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108075343577 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389690205339 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16777998938 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059202507857 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.